Dave Baranyi
2009-02-12 01:29:58 UTC
Gawd - that was awful writing. Characters acting like idiots for no obvious
reasons, and plenty of "accidents" to drive the plot along. I absolutely
hate story writing like that! That's not drama, that's not romance, that's
not real life - that's crap writing!
Okay, some
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Okay, let's list the totally uninspired pieces of used toilet paper that
were substituted for a reasonable script:
Ryuuji calls Minori to ask her for the thousandth time to meet him at the
School Christmas party. There is no answer, and when the phone goes to voice
mail, suddenly Taiga starts shouting out as loud as a fire siren in the
background. Of course, this coincident will have an Effect later on.
Ryuuji and Taiga go to the Christmas Party and all of the students are
there, except for Minori. We see Minori wandering around looking totally
dejected as she goes home and changes in her pajamas. But we still don't
have any goddamned reason that she should be acting like that!
Taiga and Ami surprise everyone by singing an idol-style Christmas song.
(Okay, so the producers want to make more money off of the fans - fair
enough.) But afterwards Ami tells Ryuuji that Taiga has left to try to get
Minori to come to the party. Huh? Okay, Taiga is trying to be a "good girl
for Santa" and do good deeds.
But after visiting Minori and telling her to go to the Party Taiga decides
to go home to her apartment to "wait for Santa". Huh? Why The Fuck doesn't
Taiga go back to the party to spend time with Kitamura who is wearing Santa
pants and no shirt (for no fucking good reason at all).
Ryuuji ignores Ami's hints - no surprise there - and leaves the Party
himself. Next he suddenly appears in a giant teddy bear Santa suit to let
Taiga get a "visit from Santa" after all. (How was he able to find that suit
so easily? Yeah sure. okay, I'll accept that extra lame explanation.)
Taiga enjoys the "Teddy Santa" even though she knows that it is Ryuuji. But
then Taiga takes off the Teddy head and pushes Ryuuji out the door to meet
Minori at the Party. Then after Ryuuji leaves Taiga suddenly changes her
mind and starts to cry because she wants Ryuuji after all.
Huh????? When did Kitamura suddenly become yesterday's newspaper?
Now for the good part - Taiga runs out after Ryuuji, calling out his name.
Will the writers let her find him? Nah, there are too many episodes left. So
Taiga is left crying and wailing out Ryuuji's name in the street.
But wait - there is one more Totally Fabricated Coincidence left to be
slammed onto the heads of the audience - Minori JUST HAPPENS to be walking
past Taiga's apartment and hears Taiga wailing for Ryuuji.
OF FUCKING COURSE - Minori now goes to meet Ryuuji who is sitting outside
the school while still wearing the Teddy Suit. Minori pulls her cap over her
eyes, reminds Ryuuji about their discussion that past summer about "UFOs"
and "Ghosts", and says that she "still hasn't seen one", and then goes home.
At this point, Ryuuji has no fucking idea what is going on, but considering
all of the totally unbelievably crappy writing that has been foisted upon
everyone, that is the one thing that isn't surprising.
Okay, my point after all of this venting - the Writers didn't have to get to
this point in the story via such a brain-dead approach. They could have
written something where the characters didn't act like idiots and where
everything didn't have to depend upon coincidences. And they still could
have gotten to the same place.
There is no excuse for such lazy writing.
Dave Baranyi
reasons, and plenty of "accidents" to drive the plot along. I absolutely
hate story writing like that! That's not drama, that's not romance, that's
not real life - that's crap writing!
Okay, some
S
P
O
I
L
E
R
S
P
A
C
E
Okay, let's list the totally uninspired pieces of used toilet paper that
were substituted for a reasonable script:
Ryuuji calls Minori to ask her for the thousandth time to meet him at the
School Christmas party. There is no answer, and when the phone goes to voice
mail, suddenly Taiga starts shouting out as loud as a fire siren in the
background. Of course, this coincident will have an Effect later on.
Ryuuji and Taiga go to the Christmas Party and all of the students are
there, except for Minori. We see Minori wandering around looking totally
dejected as she goes home and changes in her pajamas. But we still don't
have any goddamned reason that she should be acting like that!
Taiga and Ami surprise everyone by singing an idol-style Christmas song.
(Okay, so the producers want to make more money off of the fans - fair
enough.) But afterwards Ami tells Ryuuji that Taiga has left to try to get
Minori to come to the party. Huh? Okay, Taiga is trying to be a "good girl
for Santa" and do good deeds.
But after visiting Minori and telling her to go to the Party Taiga decides
to go home to her apartment to "wait for Santa". Huh? Why The Fuck doesn't
Taiga go back to the party to spend time with Kitamura who is wearing Santa
pants and no shirt (for no fucking good reason at all).
Ryuuji ignores Ami's hints - no surprise there - and leaves the Party
himself. Next he suddenly appears in a giant teddy bear Santa suit to let
Taiga get a "visit from Santa" after all. (How was he able to find that suit
so easily? Yeah sure. okay, I'll accept that extra lame explanation.)
Taiga enjoys the "Teddy Santa" even though she knows that it is Ryuuji. But
then Taiga takes off the Teddy head and pushes Ryuuji out the door to meet
Minori at the Party. Then after Ryuuji leaves Taiga suddenly changes her
mind and starts to cry because she wants Ryuuji after all.
Huh????? When did Kitamura suddenly become yesterday's newspaper?
Now for the good part - Taiga runs out after Ryuuji, calling out his name.
Will the writers let her find him? Nah, there are too many episodes left. So
Taiga is left crying and wailing out Ryuuji's name in the street.
But wait - there is one more Totally Fabricated Coincidence left to be
slammed onto the heads of the audience - Minori JUST HAPPENS to be walking
past Taiga's apartment and hears Taiga wailing for Ryuuji.
OF FUCKING COURSE - Minori now goes to meet Ryuuji who is sitting outside
the school while still wearing the Teddy Suit. Minori pulls her cap over her
eyes, reminds Ryuuji about their discussion that past summer about "UFOs"
and "Ghosts", and says that she "still hasn't seen one", and then goes home.
At this point, Ryuuji has no fucking idea what is going on, but considering
all of the totally unbelievably crappy writing that has been foisted upon
everyone, that is the one thing that isn't surprising.
Okay, my point after all of this venting - the Writers didn't have to get to
this point in the story via such a brain-dead approach. They could have
written something where the characters didn't act like idiots and where
everything didn't have to depend upon coincidences. And they still could
have gotten to the same place.
There is no excuse for such lazy writing.
Dave Baranyi